The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from.
The table illustrates how many overseas residents visit Australia each year. The given line graph shows the number of visitors who came to countries over the period of 30 years.
Overall, it is clear that while Japan was the most attractive country, accounted for the highest number of travelers and China is the country that has the least visitors in both 1975 and 2005. The total of tourists was highest in 2005. While there is a large number of overseas residents to Australia from 1975 to 2005.
Looking at the table, South Korea and Japan were the two countries that has the highest number of tourists visiting, at around 2.9 million and 3.2 million respectively in 1975. While Europe also has the third-highest number of visitors, at 1.1 million, in comparison with other countries, at under 0.5 million travelers. In the last year 1975, the total of visitors who travel to countries was 8.8 million. In 2005, most of the number of tourists visiting countries increased significantly. Japan, South Korea, and Europe were also one of the highest percentages, at 9.1 million, 12.0 million and 4.5 million respectively, in comparison with other nations were only under 3.0 million. In the last of 2005, the total of travelers visiting countries was about 30.4 million.
Looking at the line graph, overseas citizens who visit Australia was started at 10 million and continued to increase significantly to above 30 million at end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... total of tourists was highest in 2005. While there is a large number of overseas res...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...sts was highest in 2005. While there is a large number of overseas residents to Australia from 19...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01239669421 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65562344959 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479338842975 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3440248027 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.083333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194190493764 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102832361702 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847963012606 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171527518823 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115208731097 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.