Students should pay the full cost of their own university studies, rather than have free higher education provided by the state.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opionion.
There is no reason to pay the full cost of universities when the government universities offer you free higher education unless you don't want to study in private university than public university and you are well settled with having a good amount of money in your pocket. I'm somewhat agree with this statement and disagree. In this essay I would like to explain that on which causes I agree this statement and due to what reasons I disagree.
Firstly, if there is a lower class student who can't pay the university fee of his higher studies, then it is a great benefit for him to get free higher education in government universities. For example there was a friend of mine who didn't had the enough money to get higher education but at the end he got the free admission and free studies in state university and still studying there and completing his dreams.
Secondly, some of the students don't want to study in state universities because they think these universities don't provide good education as private universities. This kind of students usually take the admissions in private universities and pay the fees by themselves or those students who are just rich and want to show off that they are studying in private universities and paying plenty of money from their pockets are also in this type.
In conclusion, I would say that if you don't have enough money to pay then state universities are the best option to choose but if you don't like to study in state universities and have enough money to pay then it is also your choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69003690037 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64365327843 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479704797048 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8161211546 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.875 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.875 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.375 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408030512865 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180534425621 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601482238285 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245049914695 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641695176945 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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