It is undeniable that a number of offenders tend to perform a bad education. While I accept that educating people in jail is an effective way to tackle with crime rate, I think that other measures are also equally vital.
To begin with, there is no doubt that providing education in prison plays a crucial role in decreasing the crime rate. For example, by offering education on vocational training, those criminals are allowed to gain knowledge and specific job skills, all of which are valuable skills in their future. The aim of this educational method is to promote prisoners have more job opportunities after serving a prison sentence and providing a comprehensive understanding about consequences of committing the crime. As a result, approaching with a better education, a vast majority of criminals are less likely to re-offend after being released back into the community.
However, I am of the opinion that alternative methods are also important to mitigate crime problems. One solution would be for governments impose stricter punishments on those who commit a dangerous issue. For instance, providing capital punishment with murderer could act as deterrent and would prevent people from breaking the law. Another solution would be for skilled polices go to schools and talk with youngsters about the danger of committing crime and lifestyle in prison. It is better to educate children who are not mature enough and more likely to commit crime when they are in school rather than when being served in jail. Consequently, if these measures could be used, it would have a positive impact on reducing crime.
In conclusion, besides providing these educations for offenders, I believe that we could utilize these other solutions to ensure the reduction of the crime rate.
- Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 84
- Topic: Some people think that the government has the duty to ensure that its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe this is individuals' responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Studies show that many criminals have a low of education For this reason people that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can ge a job when leave prison Do you agree or disagree 67
- Task 2: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17301038062 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83813391698 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598615916955 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0220556036 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235903304404 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799649929801 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443809681625 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131460008981 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511205659392 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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