A number of studies have illustrated that young people these days tend to socialize online rather than face-to-face communicating. This is occurring due to the escalation of social devices along with the advantages of communicating without meeting in person. Due to these causes, there are a mixed variety of methods has been proposed.
We are living in a new era where everything around us is digitized. As a result, how people communicate is changing from meeting face-to-face to seeing one through the smartphone's screen. Teenagers, who are more proficient in using social devices find internet communication advantageous. Firstly, it is not required to appear decently whenever talking to others. Secondly, they could use aids to convey their ideas to others easily. For instance, when telling a story, displaying a video referring to the story would make it more appealing. Last but not least, adolescents could chat with overseas friends who share the same interest with them without traveling a long journey. Due to these above reasons, it is no doubt that socializing online has become common among the young generations.
Nevertheless, preventing direct communication would lead to the lack of some social skills. Hence, seeking solutions to this problem is the priority of today's society. In my opinion, to encourage young people to step out of their zone behind the screen, parents and friends should talk to them more to help them find interest in speaking face-to-face. Besides, teenagers should conscious of the drawbacks of communicating deficiency, such as losing connection with loved ones or uncontrolled immersion in hyperreality. This will drive to consequences. For example, becoming depressed and paranoid. These are the two critical measures to this occurrence.
In conclusion, it is indisputable that online socializing has a mixed variety of advantages with people, especially young
ones but the consequences it could cause if there were no proper solutions is unpredictable
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...advantages with people, especially young ones but the consequences it could cause...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42628205128 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10340996893 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612179487179 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6335986256 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1052631579 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159117212113 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428186805764 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036922683067 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849563391421 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355103907488 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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