Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case?
It is argued that in today's society, young people prefer meeting their friends or other people via social online rather than face-to-face. While I utterly concur with this view because this may help to save time and money, I am strongly convinced that this has a profound effect on the young generation.
To begin with, it has been widely demonstrated that social online in order to meet people may help to save money and time. In reality, it is obvious that people can talk to other friends or parents via social media such as Facebook and Telegram without going out. In addition, people still talk together on their phones using social media when it is rain. For this reason, teenagers spend a lot of time meeting their friends or other people through Facebook, Telegram and so on rather than face-to-face. A good example of this is my sister, she spends a great deal of time browsing social media, and talking to her love and friend, even her parents.
On the other hand, it is clear that misusing social media triggers an adverse impact on the young generation. In the fact that internet networks can be regarded as a sharp knife, there are numerous short films which lead to effects on the teenagers such as website 18+. As a consequence, young people may mimic the bad activities in the website, resulting in a profound impact. This can be evidenced by many young children making love under 16 age in Vietnam according to a newspaper named Tien Phong.
In conclusion, I completely agree with this view that whereas many teenagers prefer meeting other people via facebook, telegram and so on because of saving time and money, I am strongly convinced that social media causes a far-reaching consequence such as website 18+.
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- Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 61
- For school children their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries Do you agree or disagree 67
- The charts below show the number of people in Europe who were affected by four types of noise by day and by night in cities and rural areas in 2007 82
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78929765886 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50021866808 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511705685619 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1781677085 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108344862906 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435235074175 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378192644965 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817392809253 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300892732929 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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