Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment?
Travelling to far-flung lands and immersing in the local culture or melting into the mountain landscape is hot trend today. In my opinion, this evolution could have both advantageous and disavantageous influences in the local and the environment. While organized tour to remote areas and community brings a huge quantity of benefits for the former such as creating a stability job, enhancing the average incomes, the opposite of that have a profound effect on the latter.
To begin with, it has been widely demonstrated that tourism to isolated areas and community will give rise to the positive impart for the local such as providing a promising job market, increasing the their revenue. In reality, appealling the visitor play a crucial role in their own country in general and the local people in particular. As a result, thanks to the development of tourism industry, local government can help people to escape the toughest situation such as starvation in isolated lands, which lead to the enhancement of incomes. A good example of this is Sapa province, being one of the most difficult areas in Viet Nam. After ameliorating infrastructure such as road network, creating many gorgeous sceneries and now being the best place to live. As a consequence, the local is tour guide, resulting in rising the occupation opportunities, improving revenue for indegenous people in Sapa.
On the other hand, it is obvious that, the waste has been released by visitors, triggering far-reaching consequences to environment such as air pollution or infectious diseases. In the fact that some of visitors could be not aware of influences in environment, the waste is dumped into the quarters. Without quick treatment, the air, water, and land, which was once pristine, will soon be polluted. This can be evidenced by Hong lake, a enormous quantity of waste in sideroad after celebration is organized.
In conlusion, while travelling to far-away areas have a advantageous effect on the local people such as providing stable employment, enhancing the income. The opposite of that have dramaticl impart on environment such as waste. In my perspective, this development is of necessity and the local government must have solution to radically tackle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the visitors') or simply say ''some visitors''.
Suggestion: some of the visitors; some visitors
...r infectious diseases. In the fact that some of visitors could be not aware of influences in env...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct on the local people such as providing stable employment, enhancing the income....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in general, in particular, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21944444444 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01523779338 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538888888889 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5516934229 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.4375 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260841876265 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715233274926 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660035269604 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142350816727 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807997893158 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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