Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, while others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It is argued that the government should not fund for supporting art and culture, while other people advocate for this view. Whereas subsidies are advised to use for assisting art and culture are not essential because of using that money to tackle urgent problems such as unemployment, funding by the government for cultural activities may boost the economic nation. I fully concur with the second view.
To begin with, it has been widely demonstrated that subsidies should be used for handling serious issues such as jobless. In reality, it is undoubted that redundancy can trigger a lot of detrimental effects, namely on the unemployed. They have difficulties in making purchases of food, or other commodities because of the lack of money. For this reason, subsidies are extremely imperative. For instance, during the terrible period of infectious diseases such as covid-19, many people encounter difficulties, particularly finance. As a result, funding for supporting art and culture is not of necessity.
Despite the obvious arguments above, in my opinion, I think that subsidies by the government for cultural activities can foster the growth of the economic nation. Given the fact that extraordinary culture may appeal to visitors, particularly oversea travelers. Fortunately, this results in a positive impact on tackling unemployment. It is evident that this can create occupation opportunities and as a consequence, the unemployed will seize these opportunities in order to escape obstacles in their life. A good example of this is Vietnam, this country paved a new way as well as invested a lot of money in cultural activities aimed at the enhancement of visitors in the world. And until now, the policy is still effective and brings a lot of benefits.
In conclusion, based on the mentioned arguments above, from my perspective, I advocate for the second view. Subsidies by the government for culture can boost the economic nation, addressing the scarcity of employment in the modern society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, so, still, well, whereas, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28526645768 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04838263154 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539184952978 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4023800612 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1764705882 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387752343426 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114274274268 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116862965058 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239768227392 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106215301621 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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