Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people claim that face to face study is a more effective way than learning online at home. In my view, i'm not totally agree with this.
Firstly, it obvious that there are several benefits of going to school to study. Students get to improve their communication by interacting directly to their friends or teachers, the lessons will be more interesting.For instance, studying online at home , the teachers can not obsevere whether students are study or not, studen can be distractable and can not understand the lessons well. Addtionally, because of the internet or devices problems, students can not enter the online class. As a result, their academic result will be declined.
In the other hand, studying online have some adventages as well. First, you can study any time and anywhere you like if your devices are connected to internet. It is very flexible and convenient. It does not takes much time to join the classroom to study like the way you go to school everyday. It is also a great way to avoid interacting with people, because of covid -19 for example. Moreover, internet is a various source of information, you can find every data for your lessons, project; therefore, your accademic result can be improved. Another reason is that some students are affraid of going to school because of bullying, but now their are safe at home, no one can touch them.
In sume, learning an online class or go to school to study has its own benefits. It is not really necessary because the result you get depend on the way you studying.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...s, the lessons will be more interesting.For instance, studying online at home , the...
^^^
Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng.For instance, studying online at home , the teachers can not obsevere whether s...
^^
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'take'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: take
...ry flexible and convenient. It does not takes much time to join the classroom to stud...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...ry flexible and convenient. It does not takes much time to join the classroom to stud...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... to study like the way you go to school everyday. It is also a great way to avoid intera...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...like the way you go to school everyday. It is also a great way to avoid interactin...
^^
Line 3, column 640, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... to school because of bullying, but now their are safe at home, no one can touch them...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a result, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62705717354 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.228123138 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264765154865 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834568754204 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666466178948 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180797357839 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618107057829 0.056905535591 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...s, the lessons will be more interesting.For instance, studying online at home , the...
^^^
Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng.For instance, studying online at home , the teachers can not obsevere whether s...
^^
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'take'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: take
...ry flexible and convenient. It does not takes much time to join the classroom to stud...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...ry flexible and convenient. It does not takes much time to join the classroom to stud...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... to study like the way you go to school everyday. It is also a great way to avoid intera...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...like the way you go to school everyday. It is also a great way to avoid interactin...
^^
Line 3, column 640, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... to school because of bullying, but now their are safe at home, no one can touch them...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a result, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62705717354 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.228123138 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264765154865 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834568754204 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666466178948 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180797357839 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618107057829 0.056905535591 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.