according to my opinion the person who is think of taking initiatives in life more than thinking about getting money in exchange of work that he or she is doing, is more successful. Also, by getting into greed of money the person sometimes forget the relationships that are more important than earning and collecting money. The most important thing is the happiness, as in today’s materialistic world as people have more stress because of busy schedules and they have to work whole day. that is why they only struck on earning money and can not get real happiness. secondly, earning money should be limited upto meeting the basic needs and to live a better life, however at present people have been competing with each ofher to collect money in their bank accounts in order to show their richness. so, in this way they can not be successful in their lives as if now they have been craving to earn money like this then one day they would use illegal ways to earn money. therefore, earning huge money is not the success, instead being donor for other people and sharing happiness with other people is success of life.
besides this, everyone has dreams to become famous kn life in any way such as someone wants to be a political, a soldier, a police-officer and many more. the person who follows their dreams are more delight than those who always thinks about earning money and also they do not relate their dreams with money worth. whereas, people it can be said that money is needed for earning bread and butter but greedshould not be out of limit. Apart from this, the successful person is creative and passionate and has a high thinking and simple living.
To conclude, although money is needed for living life kn a better way, yet i think that people should not get into the greed and money does not indicate the success of the person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, apart from, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66360856269 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34258748996 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.326358061 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235741846032 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100850662341 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590399504846 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172914272308 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313072999142 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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