Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that earning exorbitant amounts of money is not difficult to sports stars nowadays. While many people argue that they deserve such great salaries, I believe that sports professionals should be paid much less.
On the one hand, there are several reasons that support for high income in sports. Firstly, it is undoubted that sportspersons always work under incredible pressure in a fiercely competitive environment. Actually, in order to success, constant training is required so that sportspersons can exert themselves to the limit when they compete. In other words, they have to be in the peak of condition all the time to ensure for performing at the highest level. Secondly, being an endorsement of sporting goods places a huge proportion of sports stars salaries while there is no room for other professionals to do so. For example, David Beckham earns millions of Dollar each year for being Nike’s brand representative.
On the other hand, it seems to me that other professions should deserve higher income. Similar to the sports stars, they also need to work extremely hard to succeed and recognized. For instance, a doctor has to spend not only six years at university but also their whole career life to gain and update knowledge and it is even harder to become a well-known doctor which requires loads of uncredited criteria. Additionally, sports professionals are no more than entertainers who do not play integral contribution to society in comparison with a doctor who saves thousands of lives and still keeps doing that crucial responsibility for life or a scientist who invents things that make life better. Finally, it is worth saying that people can live without sports stars but not for other professions.
In conclusion, although sportspersons play a certain role in the society, I support that others professionals are more important for life and should have a chance to earn more income.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12063492063 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93048717828 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593650793651 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9697377597 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204823939986 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072515077636 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628811853703 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136288753645 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279395938058 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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