Task 2: Internet access helps young people and workers achieve their education and work goals more easily than before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that Internet has been playing a crucial role in assisting youngsters and employees to attain their academic as well as occupational ambitions, which is easier to achieve than in the past. From my perspective, I agree that cyberspace helps humans in various aspects like supplying a large amount of information for users.
On the one hand, it is acknowledged to be a method to research information human needs, There is an abundance of sources of things, knowledge on the Internet, which can help users get access to materials and news about their relative fields. Were the Internet not to appear, humans would be struggling with many issues in getting access to news around the world, even preventing them from developing abilities and work proficiency. Hence, due to technological advancement, a huge amount of information on the cyber world has been assisting people in improving and being knowledgeable, which is indispensable in human lives.
On the other hand, though the cyberworld is an excellent place to communicate, it is unwise to rely on this network to search for materials. The most pressing issue is that the rise of fake news disseminates to the imprudent searching users, which is done by internet scammers on the cyber world in order to defraud or send blackmails to low-tech. Take the Covid-10 pandemic as an example, the scammers have sold the fake viruses vaccination to defraud low-tech individuals to believe and purchase with the cost an arm and leg prices, whilst there is no authentic vaccine for that viruses. Thus, humans need to filter out unwarranted sources of information and have caution when searching via cyberspace.
In summary, Internet has its prominent features in exchanging information though it has some drawbacks. Nonetheless, I have a strong agreement that the network is undoubtedly useful in supplying knowledge for users, and people shall be wise when accessing many sources of information via cyberspace.
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| 2023-08-03 | Trương Bảo Kiên | 92 | view |
| 2023-04-24 | letrang250191 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 422, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'viruses'' or 'virus's'?
Suggestion: viruses'; virus's
...xample, the scammers have sold the fake viruses vaccination to defraud low-tech individ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, nonetheless, so, then, thus, well, in summary, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21003134796 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98943544592 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561128526646 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2027511613 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.090909091 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112708366394 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438041504696 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394492379592 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076909549489 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479140172263 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.