Task 2: People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that those who contribute to society like scientists, teachers are the most successful. Discuss both and give your opinion?
Task 2: people believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. others say that those who contribute to society like scientists, teachers are the most successful. Discuss both and give your opinion?
There are two opposite points of view about who can be defined as a successful person. some incline to the affluent ones, while some argue that people who devote to society like scientists, teachers should be considered successful. I contend that there are numerous people flourishing at their own domains and the norm of accomplishment should not be limited to a particular kind.
Looking from a personal viewpoint, to live a wealthy life is ideal for the majority of people. In this materialistic world, people who generate immense income for their businesses or companies often turn out to have brilliant ideas and problem-solving skills and tend to be highly appreciated and respected. having enough money in the bank provides people with plenty of options, they can go ahead with their desires without having to worry about their bank balance. Besides, getting rich means having the opportunities to set up a solid foundation for the future generations. Aristocrats children are provided with the right education and large social networks from their families, which enable them to establish their own fortunes. To sum up, for the most, those who accumulate a great amount of financial wealth to support themselves and others can be seen as accomplished.
However, it is wrong to evaluate a person’s success just in terms of his monetary worth. success depends on various factors such as age, goals and their social contributions. In instance, for scientist, accomplishment equals conducting a scientific breakthrough that benefits society. Moreover, owing to people like scientists, teachers,… ; the world can develop sustainably. Many scientific achievements have provided us with various solutions for global setbacks such as this Covid pandemic, vaccines have been invented. Another evident reason is that teachers play major roles in broadening the future generation’s knowledge. If it had not been for the devotion of teachers, there would be no fundamental contributors to the countries’ prosperties.
In conclusion, while some think that being affluent equals being successful, I contend that social accomplishments contributed by the intellectuals are of equal importance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Others
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52266666667 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11216013178 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9408204844 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.55 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299859800424 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991012451095 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137998313871 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212833913937 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.262957449322 0.056905535591 462% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.