Task 2. The population of many cities is growing rapidly. What are effects on people living in these cities? What can be done to maintain the quality of life of people?
It is true that recently, there has been a dramatic growth in the population of many cities. While this tendency can possess profound effects on the lives of urban dwellers, several solutions can be employed to tackle the problem.
The mass exodus of migrants from the countryside to the urban areas can result in numerous consequences for daily life in the cities. In terms of accommodations, an excessive increase in population density means urban infrastructure will be inadequate to cope with the daily requirements of people. Lack of housing stocks can increase homelessness and promote the appearance of shanty towns and slum areas. As a result, many inhabitants have to endure squalid housing conditions. From the societal perspective, the rapid expansion of the city population also leads to a shortage of employment. Furthermore, youngsters will find more difficulties to earn a living, as well as shouldering an ever-growing financial burden resulting from accommodations or healthcare services.
In order to maintain an acceptable quality of life for the residents, national and local authorities should impose different appropriate measures. Firstly, people should be provided access to amenities, and this could be made possible through the regulation of the policies regarding property planning and construction programs. Secondly, the government should also introduce restrictions on the number of people flooding the city centers to mitigate the excessive increment of labor and economic migrants. This could be an effective stopgap measure while funding was provided for the improvement of the economy in rural areas in terms of jobs, education, and healthcare systems.
In conclusion, the massive migration of people from the countryside to big cities can pose a high threat to the daily life of urban residents. Thus, action must be taken to ensure a decent quality of life for people that have been directly influenced by this tendency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45394736842 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08562450747 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9625637996 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276705733143 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841724120697 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461237372908 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163934644894 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372362479994 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.