Task 2At present the media affect people's lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development?

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At present the media affect people's lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development?

Submitted by erni-k on Tue, 01/02/2018 - 06:47

The society's life has affected by the internet recently. The impact of media has significant effect on people's lives nowadays. Easy to judge a person by social media is one of the big impact of media in daily activity. Judging a person directly without any evidence is a negative thing that will not develop a country and its people.
The internet has a big role for many people in their activities. One of the famous media in this world is Facebook. There are a lot of human who use it in daily routines. Following this, easy to judge someone else is the impact of Facebook. It is true. Nowadays many mature people believe news that showed by Facebook's home directly. They do not check the resources of the news well. Actually we always call it with 'hoax'. For example, during Indonesian president election in 2016, there were a lot of news that rose on Facebook, WhatsApp, or BBM without a fact and badly there were many people who believed the news (hoax). Sometimes, hoax contented a bad comment about candidates of president or a good issues about the candidates. It aimed to interact many people to choose a certain candidate.
Thus, easy to judge a person via the internet is a negative impact for a country, because the scale of this impact is not only happen in some places but almost in whole places in a country. According to the example above, perhaps hoax was risen to politic aim and the aim was only for benefit some parties in Indonesia. Honestly, most of Indonesian people believed the hoax of president election. I could imagine how many people would be wrong to choose the candidate, because they were easy to judge people only by media without a fact.
In conclusion, recently the media has affect people's life significantly. To judge someone without a fact is famous impact that will give a negative impact for many people and its development.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, honestly, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69207317073 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52715582867 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481707317073 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2648885149 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2857142857 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.619047619 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213188050481 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702112663342 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067120266812 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164973242812 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716982204351 0.056905535591 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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