Technology has made world a better place to live? Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that we are living in an Age of evolution technology where everything seems easier and more available. While some people think that they are unhappy although electronic information helps connections more convenient, I strongly believe happiness not only depend on this development but also relate to others factors.
One of drawbacks of electronic information age is human are becoming depend on technology. Today they could easy share their individual-living by many online channels where the lasted trending in the world are updated. It makes they spending almost their concentration on internet, leading the disconnected to real-life, so that people think they are isolated to society and hard to achieve the happiness.
Furthermore, electronic Information age give us a wide range of online entertainment choices, making the imbalance between indoor and outdoor activities. For example, instead of participate to sporting games or social clubs, people want to stay at home to what a television show. It maybe not a big negative impact on health, but in long term it could cause some metal problems and weak physical condition. And when we are unwell, we cannot feel happy.
Opponents of this opinion believe that happiness almost come from the internal self-awareness and partly affected by external factors. In fact, living in the age of electronic information brings many international friendship which make us perceive like a part of the world, do not feel lonely and isolate sometimes. We also could build several lucky chances in the work, or good relationships by taking advantage of net-working, therefore, we would create a better life with a lot of happiness and joyfulness.
All things considered, while information technology could give people many benefits of communication, happiness is still a difficult term to define. Therefore, i support that happiness depend on single person, could achieve by controlling the attitude and mindset.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39935064935 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07458275482 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600649350649 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6237095083 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.785714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814370819904 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267897928221 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410227680664 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437380689882 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290133084322 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.