The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
It is believed by some that people often tend to follow and copy from others, particularly in fashion and consumer goods areas. In my opinion, this is a valid view considering the behaviour of individuals in the prevailing society.
The tendency of copying from others can often be seen in fashion, at present society and also throughout the history. Fashion often can be associated with the popularity and the word 'fashion' itself has a hidden meaning of copying what the majority do at a particular community. One of the major reasons to evolve fashion trends is that people like to get the attraction of the society or they might want to represent a particular group in the community. For example, affluent and those who come from high casts follow fashions that are followed by others in the same social group.
In recent years, consumerism has changed the day to day lives of the people to a greater extent. One of the driving factors behind the consumerism can be seen as the people's tendency to copy from others. In other words, for most of the buyers, it is often the case that they buy a particular item not because they really need it, but because most of their friends or neighbours buy it. Sellers' promotions along with the reason explosion in the social media usage have accelerated this trend.
In conclusion, it is a widely known fact that human beings have the habit of imitating others particularly when it comes to fashion and consumer items. As for any other trends, this trend also has both positive and negative effects. I believe people should be wary to not to copy or follow everything they come across, and to choose carefully what best fit for themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...hind the consumerism can be seen as the peoples tendency to copy from others. In other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, as for, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76791808874 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5626331625 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539249146758 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0268124758 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216177430835 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780068314989 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722269405409 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127024695191 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433102323877 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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