Nowadays, media strongly tends to favor turning its concentration on social issues and emergencies over introducing novel beneficial improvements worldwide. It is widely argued that this situation exerts negative impacts on mankind. This essay solely agrees with the above idea. This essay will first demonstrate how its positive effect on human’s healthy consciousness, and then talk about its advantage of provoking creativity.
First of all, by reporting news related to social problems and emergencies, media plays a crucially important role in raising public awareness of healthy lifestyles. Many widespread diseases and illnesses are reported to be life-threatening and dangerous to society, and this form of information greatly helps people to protect themselves from being infected. Taking Vietnam as a prime example, due to the outbreak of coronavirus epidemic, Vietnamese government takes advantage of the strong influence of media such as television, or social media to send a strong message about this detrimental virus, and therefore, give its citizens healthy advice to keep the disease at bay.
Another significant point is that broadcasting instant emergencies about many situations also greatly stimulates social creativity. More specifically, this type of transmitting heated information provides people with a sufficient amount of knowledge about an urgent situation, and thus tons of inventions worldwide appear to be a temporary solution to handle an issue. For instance, because of the long-term impact of drought in many regions in South East Asia, the agricultural productivity shows a strong tendency of poor harvesting, resulting in the creation of many filter machines invented to supply farmers with freshwater for agricultural purposes.
In conclusion, media is an important means of providing useful information about heated social problems as well as immediate emergencies, and it not only helps people to be self-aware of their physical health but also hugely stimulates many helpful inventions for society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77557755776 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12860146576 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627062706271 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.4624131758 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.090909091 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941279172848 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371455119946 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286668771473 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549588942735 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019763978502 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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