there are many different type of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Everybody exists in the world has a soul, which is emotional and go up and down briskly with all the fluctuation in life. This is accurate time that music becomes a best friend beside each other. When we was a little child, we slept in a song mother sang. Day by day and year by year we realize that music is unware beside us to take care that soul. It answers for the question Why do we need music. Nowadays a enormous type of music is comporised in the world. Beside the traditional music, the international music become popular. No one can put both of them onto a scale to find which one is more important. We just can say that which one is suitable for which generations and which time in the life. In an opened world today we could discover timing with information with only one click in the internet. By that way we can keep in touch with international connection, which co-ordinate the young new generations with EDM, rock, pop and plenty of type of music. We enter into the world but we do not lose our features, we conservation country music. In particularly the new generation often can not feel the country music, this is insteaded for the speech of our older people. The same that a tree grown up by drinking water throught their suckers. We was born in a country and we effort to keep the traditional music to distinguish with each other. Finnaly let’s become a young person who know exactly orgination and also ready to enter to the big world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...his is accurate time that music becomes a best friend beside each other. When we ...
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Line 1, column 410, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...question Why do we need music. Nowadays a enormous type of music is comporised in...
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Line 1, column 1255, Rule ID: PERS_PRONOUN_AGREEMENT_SENT_START[6]
Message: Use first person plural verb with 'we': 'are', 'were'.
Suggestion: are; were
...inking water throught their suckers. We was born in a country and we effort to keep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46641791045 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53081641852 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533582089552 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4362186489 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.8125 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389869066004 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150275330523 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133098383958 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.389869066004 0.151304729494 258% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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