There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Nowadays, when listening to music we have numerous choices to make because the music world is becoming more and more diverse. I think there are varieties of reasons why music is a vital part of our lives. To my view, all types of music play an imperative role in each country for their owns advantages.
Music provides people with a large number of benefits. As our world is getting developed, the burden in the lives rises accordingly. As a result, we all need some ways to lessen the stress after working hard all day. We unconsciously play a random favourite song in the playlist, mumble along with the lyrics, and forget all the irritating things of the day. Moreover, learning a new language through music is an effective way for the young today. When interviewed about how students are studying foreign languages, they all say that music helps them much better than books because of the burden of homework, they hardly have time to rest.
It is hard to compare which kinds of music is more important because they are all helpful. Traditional music helps citizens to retain their cultures; furthermore, it also reminds descendants of their origins and their nation’s histories. In Vietnam, students are taught their heroic history through music lessons and songs broadcast in big ceremonies. Whereas, modern music is the bridge making people connect with the outside world. For instance, Taylor Swift is a famous singer who is admired by many audiences from the young to the old. Therefore, anyone who loves her creates a fan club to share the enjoyments of her songs and make friends.
To sum up, everyone can realize the importance of music in our lives today. Moreover, both traditional and international music bring us benefits that we should be grateful for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...advantages. Music provides people with a large number of benefits. As our world is getting devel...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and songs broadcast in big ceremonies. Whereas, modern music is the bridge making peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, i think, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91694352159 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58244910657 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594684385382 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1828684896 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0588235294 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409226922874 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128428047261 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820272450092 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267314666475 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735270320932 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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