There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
In this era, music genres grow on more diversities since it has become popular entertainment in the worldwide. Most people believe that listening to music will recharge our positive energy. On my perspective, both traditional and international music are crucial to hear which I will elaborate below.
To begin with, talking about music is always related with amusement. In the beginning of the day, for the example, people usually turn the music on and sing to fill their daily morning activities. This is the way music brings vibrant to person’s life, especially for boosting their good mood to face the life reality. Furthermore, it is commonly agreed that listening to music reflects our expression of emotion. Due to the touching and relatable lyrics, people fond of listening to music during their awful day.
In addition, the music preferences are polarized into two groups, both traditional and international. Those genres are totally essential in terms of learning. On the one hand, traditional music is obviously precious to educate pupils about their provenience, that it is preferable for everyone to preserve their cultural songs. For instance, traditional song is utilized for school bel in terms of familiarize their students about nationality. On the other hand, international music is commonly taught during the foreign subjects so all students gain more insights by listening to that genre. Therefore, both traditional and international songs are vitally important to be heard.
To conclude, music is always required to fill everybody’s life that can be useful to save their mood and emotion. Personally, I accept the apparent vitals for listening both international and traditional music genres due to the myriad things that we obtain for learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, talking about, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40501792115 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96232601933 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7300353178 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324767097196 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11951942257 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477964950789 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218773574504 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217623392199 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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