There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
The music is an art of different rhythms and sounds related in a way that the final result to be a nice melody. Nowadays people can't live without music. The music is like a pill when you are not in good mood and listening to your favourite song you will feel much better and relaxed. We could divide music into two parts: Traditional music and International! There are also different styles of music for every taste- Jazz, Pop, Rock and Roll, Classical music, Funk, House and many others.
According to some people, International music is more important than Traditional. The music known worldwide is connecting the different nations. This kind of music should be ideal for international cosmopolitan groups. For example, international music made by Bulgarians would be much more liked and understood by the world than the traditional one. However, each country has its own traditional music and particular instruments based on national customs. The traditional music is priceless because it has been given from generation to generation. For instance, each country has its own anthem which revives pride in its citizens.
It seems to me that traditional music is much more important than the International. We have to preserve alive traditional music because it is fortune our ancestors left us. The traditional music of each country will stay alive forever while the International is changing repeatedly. And its priority is to unite all countries in the world.
To sum up, Traditional music is more valuable than International! Every nation has to keep its music and traditions alive. Thus, each country will be distinguishing and unique.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...lt to be a nice melody. Nowadays people cant live without music. The music is like a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1797752809 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94083102947 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6077920219 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3529411765 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.560238666548 0.244688304435 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202359720818 0.084324248473 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107269780507 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.38236461413 0.151304729494 253% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343013311262 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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