There are many Vietnamese people who claim that we should merge the Solar New Year and the Lunar New Year. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
it has been claimed by some vietnamese people that the solar new year and lunar new year can be combined as one. For me as a vietnamese, I totally disagree with this opinion.
Vietnam is a country that has followed most of its historical traditions, including lunar new year. it has been celebrated through many decades and become part of our life. this is an event that was passed from generation to generation, from an elderly to a baby child. In our culture, the most important celebration in the year to us is the lunar new year. this is a chance that we gather together with our family, friends, and people that we do not have an opportunity to meet during the year. In fact, the solar new year and lunar new year are different in term of celebration and meaning. For example, western people will not have "banh chung" or "banh tet" as a traditional food, but we always have them every year. it would not be a full new year with these foods. In addition, both types of new year represent different cultures, so there is no way that it can merge. during lunar new year, we will show our beliefs in god, in our ancestors, and in our historical traditions. this is a time we represent our thankful for all we have in the past year and our wishes for the next year.
In conclusion, as these are not the same and show different values, there should not be any reason to merge it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52140077821 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54402112469 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501945525292 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4105072273 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450286807392 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169644204148 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107217794947 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292457206306 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170255865745 0.056905535591 299% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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