There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people presume a well-paid job is a mass motivation for workers to stay in a certain work field, and money is the most desirable and uttermost importance contributing to this. To some extent, this assertion; however, is not always true among people nowadays.
Whenever people are the ones that bring the bacon home to fit their kids and cover their bills, a lucrative income is abundantly a chief incentive that incentivizes them to stay working. It is apparent that the economic crisis has led to a detrimental impact on prices all over the world; everything seems unaffordable to many households, not to mention the impoverished. These people would burn the midnight oil to remain working irrespective of health conditions and sudden exhaustion. To them, money is merely, and solely, working encouragement.
On the other hand, students who have just graduated from school lack experience at work. As a result, they are prone to seek any particular sector that provides them with proper training to earn the most experience. Generally, they would spend
To recapitulate, even though many people reckon a lucrative income may help to pay all of the expenses, I believe this is not regarded as a prevalent inclination for most people to follow. Were people to work in an unpleasant environment that underlies conflicts and dissonances, they would rather seek for working pleasure than to be involved in a job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ckon a lucrative income may help to pay all of the expenses, I believe this is not regarde...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[2]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: Where; We
... inclination for most people to follow. Were people to work in an unpleasant environ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, well, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12446351931 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92119285861 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635193133047 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7507635411 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141061958311 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535027039973 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506386332258 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858180906831 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617966844572 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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