There are severe social consequences of housing shortages in cities and only the government can solve these problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that housing crisis is one of the most critical issues facing city dwellers, and this is associated with multiple serious repercussions. There are those who maintain that these problems can only be tackled by the authorities. Personally, I wholeheartedly agree with this position.
To begin with, there is a need for the provision of affordable homes for urban residents, especially those living below the poverty line. This can be achieved by the involvement of the government officials who are able to settle property prices and obtain sustainable building materials. What is more, the state plays a pivotal role in designing and constructing buildings, making sure that the erections strictly comply with safety regulations. If building projects are not managed by the government, there is possibility that individuals or private organizations may ignore safety procedures or use cheap, non-sustainable materials for their construction. For these reasons, only the government can make dwellings available and affordable for its inhabitants, helping to resolve the dearth of houses in municipal areas.
It should also be noted that in order to mitigate the pressure on places of residence, the policymakers ought to come up with new polices or schemes to reduce the rate of migration to megacities. In fact, most people move to urban areas in search of better education or employment opportunities. Major educational institutions, hospitals, companies and other entertainment outlets should therefore be relocated to the suburbs or the countryside so that fewer people will flock to the metropolises. This is a long-term approach that requires the engagement of city councils. Once the state-of-the-art facilities and infrastructures are accessible in the local areas, people would find it unnecessary to migrate to the urban ones, thereby reducing strain on the already severe housing shortages.
In sum, for the reasons mentioned above, I would contend that only the government can grapple with the lack of accommodation in metropolitan areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, well, in fact, it is true, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51104100946 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25333418871 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611987381703 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6845148956 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.785714286 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156152388498 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522573732618 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547228042335 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986790010033 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443128514085 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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