There are social,medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones.
write about the form of problems that arise from mobile phone.
Do you think that these problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?
In today's world no one can argue that technology has changed human lives significantly.There are many technological devices and systems have been invented in the last decade.Mobile phone is one prevalent innovation that improves communication method and changes the way of getting information.Some people assert that having a mobile phone has created social, technical as well as health problem.I personally believe that the benefits of mobile phones outweigh the disadvantages.
Firstly,mobile phone allows people to communicate easily.Now we can stay connected with our family members and friends no matter where we are and it consumes very few seconds unlike is sending a letter.Secondly,by dint of mobile phone we can make friends globally. There are many social media that we can use in our mobile phones and follow different countries people, their culture and also daily life style.So easily people can adapt multicultural behaviour, world-class fashion and so on.Thirdly, student also get help from internet to make their homework and assignment by using the mobile phone.There are some application in mobile phone which makes student life very convenient like stopwatch and calculator etc.
On the other hand,excessive use of mobile phone affects on our eyesight and increase mental stress.For example, a research conducted by a popular newspaper, 15% of teenagers are using glasses 24 hours in a city of Cairo.However, people are very much addicted on mobile phone. Nowadays they also interact with their friends and greet their relatives by mobile phone instead of face-to-face communication.Teenagers have become unsocial and they do not participate in any social events.In addition, mobile phone release unvisible ultimate radiation that affect on our body by increasing temperature.This negative radiation decrease our brain strength.
In conclusion,there are many disadvantages to mobile phone. However, if we use mobile phone properly then it will not be harmful for our body. The benefits we get from mobile phones outweigh it's disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63141025641 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37662804379 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.918797457 49.4020404114 326% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.625 106.682146367 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.375 7.06120827912 274% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426192566078 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223278162962 0.084324248473 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520590167607 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285395325074 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425512443109 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 13.0946893788 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 11.3001002004 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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