There is a widespread belief that among humans' inventions such as the wheels, the product which plays the greatest role is the Internet. As far as I am concerned, I favourably agree with the aforementioned statement.
The first impact of the Internet is the instant transmission of knowlegde that it permits its users. Whereas the wheels marks a technological breakthrough, the Internet allows people to spread information and ideas among the society. Although Internet makes previous ways of working and learning become old-fashioned, it nonetheless facilitates people works and lessons. For example, instead of spending times on travelling to the bureau or school, people are now able to teleworking or telelearning via the Internet by going online with simple steps. Additionally, the Internet has also revolutionised communication in business with the growth of e-commerce and online shopping.
A second significant breakthrough fr which the internet is responsible is in transforming how people keep in touch with each others. In the past, it was extremely difficult for people who lives far away with a distance of thousands kilometers. However, computer literacy provides people the chance to connect to their relatives such as video calling, online texting and so on. One obvious example is the phenomal growth in popularity of social networking sites, which having millions of users while they are still in their infancy. As the result, people can keep abreast of news about what is going on around the world.
In conclusion, as nothing is more fundamental than sharing knowledge, it is hard to deny the contribution which the Internet brings to human-beings
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the Internet. As far as I am concerned, I favourably agree with the aforemention...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to become'
Suggestion: to become
...s previous ways of working and learning become old-fashioned, it nonetheless facilitat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, still, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37642585551 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09557548371 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3142142163 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207960208379 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678182584232 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025724532013 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116534616774 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036872453125 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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