Advertisement become a part of our life. It can be seen easily around us. Generally target audience for advertisement is children because they can be easily influenced by ads and forced to purchase products like packaged food and toys. Guardians are in tense, that it affected their children very badly. Whereas promoters claim that advertisement leads children two useful information. Both views and my opinion are elaborated further.
There are some guardians, who are worried that, by watching flashy advertisements their offsprings demand unnecessary items like packaged food and toys. That junk food can influence their eating habit and led them to on healthy lifestyle. Moreover demand of luxurious toys and clothes can become a burden on their parents pocket.
Another point is, advertisement makers use false imaging and present their product or event in unrealistic manner. Also sometimes they give a temptation of free product and discounts to build their business. As result kids tend to fall for it. And build the habit of impulse buying.
On the other hand, promoters who believe that the technology and artificial intelligence e is increasing day by day. Show advertisement act as a source of information for children. Thus they can be familiar with new items and their features. What is more, some promotion campaigns related to hygiene products influence children to maintain a habit of live healthy lifestyle. To examplify, lifebuoy is providing a message of washing hands before eating through publishing there lifebuoy hand wash.
To conclude with my opinion, family show get there child familiar with strategies of publishers to identify the knowledgeable details. Because there are many ads, which provide useful information not only to kids but also to adults.
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- Some people believe that technology has made man more social To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... it affected their children very badly. Whereas promoters claim that advertisement lead...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...t and led them to on healthy lifestyle. Moreover demand of luxurious toys and clothes ca...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...product or event in unrealistic manner. Also sometimes they give a temptation of fre...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s a source of information for children. Thus they can be familiar with new items and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36524822695 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85721655362 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609929078014 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9261801363 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.65 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196282067238 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569971719918 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592465298217 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990973328544 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565850765792 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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