These days, children tend to spend a great deal of time spending digital network as internet, computer and others . Some believe this is a beneficial trend while others think it is detrimental.
It is certainly true that with the rapid development of technology, people are spending more time in digital devices as computer, smartphone, televison, tablet and many others. Some people say that this types of digital platform are badly impact on students, whereas other think that its useful for learn new things from digital sites. This essay will be analysed both these view with assisting example.
To begin with, there are many disadvantages for digital media. Firstly, student can less spend their education as a result student will not achieve their results. For example, Oxford university carried a survey of why student's grade drastically decreased in last 20 years and concluded that more than 65% student are spending more time on digital social networking site. Secondly, due to digital learning many student are facing problem of visibility. it can said that sunglasses on students rate drastically increased in last 10 years, which can be occured only spend more time on televison, laptop, smartphone and others. Overall, digital platform is badly effect on students, which can reduce education level and visibility rate.
On the flip side of coin, many citizen think that there are various advantages of digital sites. First of all, student can easily learn any new technology from using of Google, Youtube and others. For example, nowadays almost all people are using smartphone and which can upto date with new technological advancement, which is created in the world. Apart from this, main important benefit of social networking site is to contact with each others. For example, Whatsapp, Facebook, Instragram are provided free video call option, which can help to direct contact with their relative who live in other cities as well as counties. Furthermore, digital platform is only way to spread right information to the world, which can hepl to know latest news, which can occured in the world.
In recapitulation, although there are both advantages and disadvantages of digital network, as far as I agree that which can help about learn new technology, more socialization, informed with latest news, but there are drawback also available as chlidren's education rate decreased and student needed to wear a sunglasses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ased in last 20 years and concluded that more than 65% student are spending more ...
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Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'many students'.
Suggestion: many students
...site. Secondly, due to digital learning many student are facing problem of visibility. it ca...
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Line 2, column 453, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...udent are facing problem of visibility. it can said that sunglasses on students ra...
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Line 2, column 460, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
...re facing problem of visibility. it can said that sunglasses on students rate drasti...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun citizen seems to be countable; consider using: 'many citizens'.
Suggestion: many citizens
...bility rate. On the flip side of coin, many citizen think that there are various advantages...
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Line 3, column 729, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'know the latest'.
Suggestion: know the latest
...rmation to the world, which can hepl to know latest news, which can occured in the world. ...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...echnology, more socialization, informed with latest news, but there are drawback also avail...
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Line 4, column 309, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a sunglass' or simply 'sunglasses'?
Suggestion: a sunglass; sunglasses
...te decreased and student needed to wear a sunglasses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, apart from, for example, as a result, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26815642458 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.680039138 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530726256983 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6862119595 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144869951202 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538530236447 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401006011024 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10005684588 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636717364609 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.