These days consumers are faced with an increasing amount of advertising from various companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertising? What measures should be taken to protect them?
Nowadays, companies extremely depend on advertise. These things lead to the amount of advertising are increase signigicantly. In this topic i will examine to make audience be clear and know how to take a distance in negative effectiveness that advertisement bringing back.
It is a truth that, most of people are influenced by advertising because the problem is pyschology of customer. To be clear that, the businesses are intelligient about undertand the demand of shoppers They know how it is working and operating. For instance, companies will understand their product abilities and the ages they want to focus on. After that, the business collab with several famous person in social to create a credibilities for this product. More over, they will create a impression for customer by replace and viral in social media. The standard example is Dien May Xanh in Viet Nam, they compose a song and collab with a comedy artist and it is viral for a time. Untill now, i could remember this song and sing it fluency.
In order to guarantee advertising does not pose a threat to society at large, the customer should provide the knowledge for themself. Firstly, the customer must understand the product which one the customer want to focus on, example for this idea is watching post reviews realated to this product. Research the price and place till it fit with shoopers’s finance. Sencondly, for influenced person you must follow what their specification job. Does their’s job fit with your necessity.
In conclusion, for several reason this advice is the most important in social life. In my opinions, i constantly belive that the benefit advertise bring back without the bad effect.By the way, be a good user.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, by the way, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80413009385 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1557596454 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7058823529 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14157474126 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492024807941 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521062101706 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929655168178 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447505887128 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.