These days the fashions in clothing are constantly changing. Is this affecting individuals and the environment in positive or a negative way. Give reasons for your answer and support by giving examples
The instant shift of fashion world has been an issue of broad interest to general public. In my opinion, this trend has both merits and drawbacks on people and nature which will be elaborated below.
Many fashion enthusiasts advocate to adopting to new use design, style or fabric materials in textile industry. This is may be rooted in the fact that fashion is often associated as an instrument to emphasis one’s characteristics or social class. Thus, by putting on pieces of cloths from newest collections, fashion lovers may desire for other admiration or respect. From economic perspective, manufacturers of shoes, apparel and other relevant domain of business including retail and logistics will be substantially benefited thanks to the constant replacement of consumers’ outfits.
Despite these afored-mentioned facts, fashion sector leaves tremendous carbon footprint which has detrimental impact on not only its workers but the environment as a whole. To illustrate, the remnant from fabric when inhaled in large amount could toxicate employees who work in clothing production factories. Similarly, given the surge of goods produced, a huge amount of fumes and waste are emitted from textile company that pollute atmosphere and water resources. In addition to pollution, in order to find new materials, some designers even order for the kill of animals including alligator, stingray whose skin are the input for productions of extravagant and luxurious fashion brands.
In sum, even though fashion development has offered a sense of happiness of certain individuals and income for fashion-related businesses, its pitfalls are many and should be given foremost consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... has been an issue of broad interest to general public. In my opinion, this trend has both mer...
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Line 2, column 284, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the newest'.
Suggestion: from the newest
...s. Thus, by putting on pieces of cloths from newest collections, fashion lovers may desire ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, similarly, so, thus, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5503875969 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06790719612 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670542635659 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5226286602 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.181818182 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13999510849 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475445897981 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289248613351 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785946461434 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201497459239 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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