These days the fashions in clothing are constantly changing. Is this affecting individuals and the environment in positive or a negative way. Give reasons for your answer and support by giving examples
The instant shift of fashion world has been an issue of broad interest to the general public. In my opinion, this trend has both merits and drawbacks on people and nature which will be elaborated below.
Many fashion enthusiasts advocate to adopting to new use of design, style or materials. The first rationale is that it is widely believed that fashion tends to provide people with a sense of happiness. This is may be rooted in the fact that fashion is widely associated to one’s characteristics or social classes. Thus, by putting on new pieces of cloths from all the rage collections, individuals may somehow show up their lifestyle, interests, or even sexual orientation. One prime example is that office staff tend to favor various power outfits, which are basically included trousers and shirts but mixed from distinguished color and textile in oder to convey warm and friendly impression towards their colleagues and clients. From economic perspective, manufacturers of shoes, apparel and other relevant domain of businesses including retail and logistics will be substantially benefited from constant replacement of consumers’ choice of wear.
Despite these afored-mentioned facts, fashion sector leaves tremendous carbon footprint which has detrimental impact on not only its employees but surrounding environment as a whole. To illustrate, remnants from fabric cutting when inhaled in large amount could place blue-collar workers’ health at risk. Similarly, given the surge of fashion items demand owing to fast-moving component of fashion industries, much of fumes emitted and waste disposal dumped from those companies are likely contribute to pollution of atmosphere and water resources. In addition to hazardous by products, in order to find new materials, some designers even order for the kill of animals including alligator, stingray whose skins are the input for producing of extravagant and luxurious footwear or handheld items.
In sum, even though fashion development has offered a sense of joy for certain individuals as well as income for fashion-related businesses, its pitfalls are numerous and should be given foremost consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... been an issue of broad interest to the general public. In my opinion, this trend has both mer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, similarly, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51951951952 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03989946158 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66966966967 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6866040022 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.384615385 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134106392902 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424935524999 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026954134633 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779800117474 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233786810022 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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