Many people aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives but few people achieve it What are the causes of this How to overcome this problem
Achieving balance work life has been a topic of broad interest to the general public. There are two major reasons behind this trend which will be elaborated below with solutions.
It is understandable why striving for both simultaneously accomplishing work and maintaining fulfilled private life is difficult to attain. The first point of view is that as labor market become increasingly competitive, workers would have to bear heavier workload thereby sacrifice their time spent with family. In addition to securing employment, employees are constantly dealing with up-to-minute issues which could be attributed to the invent of technological breakthroughs for the time being. By contrast, distractions originated from one’s personal life could subsequently result in deteriorating productivity in the workplace.
Given these afore-mentioned facts, three strategies could be deployed to offset the phenomenon. First, job seekers could negotiate their perks and rights which clarify terms that limit the amount of work and the time frame to certain level. Secondly, except for urgent circumstances, smart equipment should be remained away to avoid exposure when one staying at their safe haven. This could eliminate any potentially uninformed contacts which might be precursor of unnecessary annoyance. Finally, adoption of check list could be taken into account as it would help maintain wage earners’ awareness of their priorities.
In sum, the fierce competition for work and technological advancements would impede people from achieving successful career and happy life. This disadvantage could be neutralised by restriction of technology usage and favorable contract terms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Use simply 'haven'.
Suggestion: haven
...void exposure when one staying at their safe haven. This could eliminate any potentially u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82591093117 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15027108417 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7004048583 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1762649746 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133806990529 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048274585789 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475037749164 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980639583526 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567832823441 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.