It is argued that the parents of children who break the rules should be punished in some ways as parents are responsible for the children’s actions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that parents should be penalized when their children violating rules or law. I partly agree with this statement as children are denpendants and the responsibility for raising children not only fall on parents alone.
There are many reasons behind children's wrongdoings namely family background, education and peer pressure. Firstly, parents are busy and can not control their child all the time. Some families are impoverished and feeding the families seem more urgent than teaching their kids from right to wrong. In addition, schools are also accountable for kids' law breaking behaviors. This stems from the fact that young individuals spend most of their time at classes. Their personalities, altitutudes, and acts are highly impacted by teachers and classmates. Therefore, if students making mistakes, educational institutions are also be held accountable. Finally, pressure from friends is another factor contributing to violation of codes of conduct among children. For instance, when children hang out with other kids who regularly commit juvenile deliquency, they tend to imiate the patterns of behavior. Thus, the causes of the young offending rules vary and parents may not be the main component of the phenomenon.
However, there are still occasions when parental roles should be responsible for their child's behaviors. It is well-known that kids living in unhappy families would stand a higher chance making illigal actions. In this case, crimes often reflect young people's distorted views about society, which they may copy from their fathers and mothers. In the inpriliveldged families, parents who do not act as role models and shirk their responsibility for their loved ones, are the main culpirt of their children's negative behaviors. Likewise, so greedy are some parents that they can go so far to encourage their kids' violation of rules or even commitent of serious crimes such as transporting of substance, burglary, thefts. These parents are often former criminals who try to make use of their children. Thus, under these circumstances, the parents should face the consequences more or less caused by them.
In sum, even though parental roles should not be blamed for their children's mistakes in most cases, I believe that in other situations, they should be judged for their ignorance and overexploitation of kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, in most cases, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39566395664 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83363626732 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579945799458 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.454105249 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.55 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322682737491 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103642864164 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887848939971 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251009548088 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838310193992 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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