Scientists tell us that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people still continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions for this?
There is a growing concern about the general health of the public in recent years. Even though certain activities are advised to follow or discouraged by the experts, many people still ignore the recommendations and keep doing activities that may deteriorate their health. This essay will elaborate on both the reasons and measures to tackle the issues from the activities, which are bad for people's health.
Habits and pressure from work can be attributable to negative activities among people. First, it is easy that individuals can establish unhealthy behaviors and maintain such actions for long period. This is because these behaviors tend to produce immediate gratification and be easy to start. Take smoking as an example, it provides smokers with nicotin, which is an addicting substance and creates instant pleasure, in the meantime lighters and cigaretts are available virtually in any convenient stores. In addition, people, in general are under extreme working pressure nowadays. If people do not work hard and constantly upgrade their knowledge, they stand a higher chance of being eliminated from the fiercely competitive labor market. This also prevents them from building healthy habitual activities.
To solve the problem, interference of governments and companies are welcomed. The first solution is that government can make use of the media instruments to broadcast images and videos about victims of sedentary lifestyle. Another method to reduce the unhealthy activities among the public is that the authorities can introduce new regulations, which encourage the active ways of life among citizens including encouragement of bike usage, doing more exercise, and avoiding eating fastfood. More importantly, firms should make their contribution to the enhancement of their employees' health which implies the increase of productivity and product output. This can be implemented in the forms of provision of sport equipment, vouchers to gym, and sport club.
In sum, bad habits and work constraints are the main culprit of activities that cause health-related issues. The combination of effort from the governments and businesses can help to alliviate the impacts from the movement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56379821958 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93862047884 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617210682493 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0950704415 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.294117647 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19797246342 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553937538285 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057709490345 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126695673337 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631971196492 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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