These days, an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation (migration from the country to the city) and suggest some ways in which this trend could be reversed.
The internal migration of the population to huge cosmopolits has recently become the topic of the heated debates. In this regard, the tendency of the large- scale resettlement is sure to provoke overpopulation of megalopolises and utter desolation of rural regions. This essay will discuss the root effectals associated with the massive migration to big cities and propose some possible solutions to avoid them.
As far as I can guess the main effects are considered to be an overflow of urban population and the decal of villages. To start with, migration from provinces to big cities is likely to cause the overcrowding which is disruptive for ecological state and the dwelling situation. Overpopulation will induce excessive air and noise pollution negatively impacting the health state of locals. For instance, according to the Tass, the internal migration increases the level of carbon-dioxide gas in metropolises up to 39%. Besides, mass deflux from rural areas will entail the desolation as the government will be less interested into funding the suburbs. For example, according to a Russian scientist, Kim v. I., the less people dwell in country, the less development programs for the provinces will be lobbied at the Parliament. Thus, the influx to big cities is likely to cause problems with ecological and gradual devastation of provinces.
I am convinced that the solutions such as environmental studies and increasing the quality of life in suburbs may be undertaken. First of all, people need to be better informed about the consequences that the ecology faces in huge megalopolises. Mass media should spotlight the pros and cons of extra usage of private cars and the profits of the public transport system. For example, the Norwegian tv shows the benefits of bicycles' popularization which reduces the carbon dioxide emissions. Secondly, the conditions in suburbs should be improved so that people were unwilling to move away from their homeland. For instance, the mayor of Saratov promotes the ideas of mortgage rate reduction and the increase in the amount of subsidies for the locals that turns to be effective. Thereby, a plethora of steps may be completed in suburbs to reduce the tendency of removing to big cities.
To sum up , the issue of the overpopulation in megalopolises may be disruptive for elocogy and the provinces' future. Nevertheless, a reasonable application may be of a great help for tackling the mentioned phenomenon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22784810127 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07072679918 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2728919561 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202833206667 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528660846171 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450927186856 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114700655391 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585517395116 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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