These days more and more people are going to other countries for a significant period of time either to find a job or study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
In today's world, a growing number of individuals would rather move to other nations in order to work or study instead of sticking with their native country. Although there are numerous drawbacks associated with this issue, I acknowledge that its benefits will exceed them. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of this trend and explain reasons why I believe its advantages will be more significant.
On the one hand, when people leave their own homes or country, they are more likely to be forced to live by themselves, far away from their family members or beloved partner. Therefore, in some cases, individuals are susceptible to getting homesick easily, which can lead to some serious mental problems like depression. Furthermore, language barriers are another issue that they have to deal with. If individuals are not equipped with proper or adequate education, they are prone to struggle to understand lectures, presentations, or even daily conversations. As a result, these problems can make them lag behind other peers or colleagues in both academic and professional settings.
On the other hand, working and studying in other countries can bring several benefits to expatriates. First and foremost, moving to another nation is the greatest way to seek well-paid and lucrative jobs, which can be hard to find in some developing countries. Thus, it can allow workers to improve their professional and social lives. Secondly, when people expatriate to another nation, it can enable them to find a better academic opportunity. For example, in some developed countries like America or Australia, their school and university facilities as well as qualities are far more advanced than in any other country, which can help students access high-quality learning sources. Finally, high living standards are also a priority when people are keen to better their own and offspring's lives. Therefore, living in advanced countries with state-of-the-art medical technologies can offer them decent health, and also lead to decent lives.
In conclusion, although there are some disadvantages when people leave their native country to work or study such as homesickness and language barriers, I believe that its benefits will outweigh them, in terms of better professional, and educational opportunities as well as higher living standards.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3651226158 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9238085667 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564032697548 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5426356505 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0625 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243577203465 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076417370612 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455938388387 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140870294527 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459045812405 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3651226158 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9238085667 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564032697548 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5426356505 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0625 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243577203465 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076417370612 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455938388387 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140870294527 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459045812405 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.