These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive and negative development?
In term of parental roles changing in our modern societies, we easily identify more dads stay at home and look after their offsprings while a profound number of moms has gone out for work. This phenomenon originates from some complex reasons. As a result, the transfermation creates such a advantage on the sustainable development.
Human civilizations go hand in hand with women's rights, those have been acceptable and supported. Following this, women have as equal opportunities as men to empower their potentials. Needless to say, men gradually have made sense of respection their partners as well as be more open-minded about what is exchanging. They let their wives go out and earn for living, including allowing themselves stay at home and assist household chorces.
As some features above, we turn out a diversity of benefitswe obtain from the new tendency. First, women are allowed to pursue their own careers and goals in life. What we all attempt to implement reaching gender quality as well as shaping women's justice- one of 7 sustainable development goals declared by United Nations. Plus, fulfilling women's rights means buiding up a concrete family bond, living together in harmony so that children nutured in these home would get well-educated because of good family backgrounds.
in conclusion, "Men make houses, women make home" has no longer been the true wisdom in the state of these days. Otherwise, starting a family had better based on optimistic and sympathy thoughts towards "half or the world".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ed because of good family backgrounds. in conclusion, 'Men make houses, wome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26829268293 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90735390384 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69918699187 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6484299341 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216570477053 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063132938831 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605996591082 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116849803577 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640529687009 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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