These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reason for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
In today’s modern world, the change of family members’ role has been a matter of great concern.While the men tend to become a househusband, the women are the breadwinners in their family. My following essay will analyze the causes of this tendency and I personally believe that it is a positive trend.
There are several reasons for the changing role of the husband and wife in the family. First of all, gender equality has been propagated which lead to individual’s awareness of this issue has been enhanced. Everyone has accepted for men stay at home, do housework and take care their child's, at the same time, women go out to work to raise their family. Secondly, it is true that nowadays, people who work or stays at home depending on which partners earn the most money.
In my point of view, this tendency is a positive trend. This is because the women have an opportunity to pursue their career, earn money and achieve their professional. In addition to that, the notion of society is likely able to change the duties of the women. For example, in the past time, the women always sacrifice their whole time to take care of the family and do not participate in any activities in the community. Instead of that, in the present time, the women could actively pursue their dream job. In contrast, the men when staying at home will deeply understand how childcare responsibilities difficult.
In conclusion, the above essay analyzed two main causes of the change in family members’ role and I consider it to be a very positive trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84328358209 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82598451176 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5734093899 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244285486081 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832889603947 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762213977227 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133039275278 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916822376921 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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