These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work.
For the decades, it is common that a dominating figure male is a breadwinner, whereas females are keen on nurturing children. However, in modern world this trend has gone a reverse way. There are several reasons for this trend and I firmly believe that it causes drawbacks way more than benefits.
To begin with, over the last few decades the paradigm has modified and women became leaving husbands with children for work. One of the reasons could be that today females are equally educated and went through the same curriculums as males. Moreover, company managers hire more females for jobs that are less physically demanding, leaving fewer options for men. All women have different abilities, as some mothers are no longer may bring up a child. Nevertheless, they may have skills to earn more money than grooms, so fathers become responsible for taking care of offspring.
However, it is seemingly the alternation of the paradigm impacts the society negatively. Children in their growing age need more mother's love and care, which in most cases fathers are not able to provide, since they may not fulfil the role of mothers in children's life. Furthermore, not every male knows how to deal with household or daughter's upbringing. In these cases, mothers play a vital role, as females have the relevant instincts to handle the situation with a kid or housework. Therefore, the absence of mothers in the life of children seem to endanger the family ties.
In conclusion, it is true that the roles of genders are getting swapped and at the same time this trend is bringing shortcomings that affect similarly on children fostering.
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. 84
- Public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a metropolis. The Shanghai metro is the most convenient way to get around the city. Do you agree or disagree? 84
- The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and indifferent parts of the world. 67
- Some people become famous at young age Is it good thing or bad thing 90
- The chart below shows estimated world literacy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, therefore, whereas, in conclusion, in most cases, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98168498168 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.610598837 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9490187004 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203710453245 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579653778658 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641415287969 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105123822196 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599351718684 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.