things like puzzles board games and pictures can contribute to child development what would you give child to help him hurt develop and why give details and examples in your explanation
It is argued that some things such as, jigsaw puzzles, scrabble games and pictures can easily contribute to a child's growth and development. I also give these things because I believe that even it helps in children's growth and mental growth as well as I will give a some potential examples with explanations.
To commence with, there are several reasons why puzzle scrabble games and pictures contribute in pupils mental and physical growth, first of all, these things are a source of entertainment for kids. With entertainment, children also learn many things related their studies, if child spend their leisure time with these things that they boost their confidence as well as memories. For example, in survey it is proved that children can learn quickly from these things which they do not learn from their studies To explain, jigsaw puzzles are very complicated and tricky when children solve this puzzle they also increase their thinking and memory.
Moreover, and strengthening my viewpoint , puzzles and other minded games are useful because it is a source of entertainment in their spare time. In today's fast paced life mostly children prefer to spend time on their mobile phones and computer for video games. In this case, puzzles pictures games and board games are more useful because they prevent the children from the electronic gadgets. Consequently, it is not harmful method also provide children safety as well as they do not depend on others company's.
To recapitulate, in my opinion, these games also more beneficial for child development because these games provide many benefits such as entertainment, brain booster and increase as well as sharp memory apart from that it also become children to more confidence and innovative.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for example, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18309859155 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63625315877 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503521126761 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8857905108 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.2 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196794712559 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862713510022 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598189796732 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129342156268 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596483330645 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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