The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace but nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy.The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace but nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nuclear power is one of the most essential parts for helping develope the world. Due to the fact that, numerous countries have increasingly used it more to produce electricity. However, some little members of society want to use it to create nuclear weapons, which make a serious threat to the peace in the world. From my perspective, nuclear technology could have some drawbacks, but I strongly believe that its advantages may outweigh the disadvantages. This essay below will dicuss and explain the reasons for my points of view.
On the one hand, nuclear power will extremely hazadous to world peace if the individiuas who use that power lost control. The worst purpose of many nuclear industries is bomb-producing and it may become the strongest weapon serve for some wars in the future. For instance, there are some bomb-droping in this decade. The affects of that with the resident who reside in the bombed area are extremely awful. Therefore, people must be careful when using the nuclear power.
On the other hand, if people use nuclear power correctly, the benefits of it will bring a lot to humans. The best advantage of using nuclear power is that it not only provides cheap and clean electric energy but also environment friendly. In fact, electricity is one the most necessary parts in each family and industries. Therefore, nuclear power has become quite important in the present day. Futhermore, nuclear power can keep the world peace because every countries have its nuclear industries. It means using nuclear power is not depend on other countries.
In conclusion, nuclear power is a strong power and the use of nuclear power can be extremely dangerous to our planet. As a result, people must use it in control and correctly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 535, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...es. It means using nuclear power is not depend on other countries. In conclusion, nu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99315068493 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67504119115 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4936640131 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385723370981 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126149101783 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106417129383 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244679573278 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078717350167 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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