The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace but nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy.The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace but nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern world, people use nuclear in alot industries like they use to make a new enviroment-friendly power and power made from nuclear is so much so it not be waste another power and it can serve the problem of not enoght energy in some place. But some powerful country use nuclear to create new weapons for war and the weapons made from them have a giant attack power with the example is Japan in world war. In my opinion, use nuclear power with the true way, we will develop faster and problems about energy will decrease. The further paragraphs will discuss both causes and give opinion for the issue above.
On the one hand, nuclear power give people a fully energy but don't create any negative factor for enviroment like green house effect so the global warming won't happen any more and because the fully energy, people all over the worls will have a fully peace ful life. Also because nuclear power is very cheap too so we can help the people don't have enought condition to play for the electricity bills easier.
On the other hand, nuclear power can bring people the peaceful too. Because we don't need to care alot about energy so we can stop dispute energy.
In conclusion, nuclear technology can impact alot into people life and it can make some nagative effect into the earth but when people can use it in the true ways, they can have fully energy and their life will be peacefully and better.
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
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Message: You used an adverb ('fully') instead an adjective, or a noun ('energy') instead of another adjective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54117647059 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17261980489 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.1285018155 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253509257942 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124195022569 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732623249026 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156962518242 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616686562059 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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