Throughout education, boys often play sports for longer and more often than girls. Why do you think this is? Do you think this should be changed?
During schooling, boys have much more opportunities of playing sports than girls. In this essay, I will discuss why this happens and should this continue in future, or the stigma should be broken. Firstly, I will discuss the reasons why boys get more chances to participate in sports than girls. Secondly, I will explore why this shouldn’t be continued ahead and equal opportunities should be given to both.
It is always noted that number of boys in educational institutions joining sports teams and clubs is more because of higher opportunities and number of teams available for them. While, girls only have handful of teams to join. In addition to that, there is a stereotype, that girls should participate only in traditional subjects. For example, girls should join subjects like music, literature and arts, whereas boys should be involved in sports. Apart from this, there is a parental pressure on students for selecting a particular subject based on their gender.
Equal opportunities should be given to both, irrespective of their gender. Girls and Boys should be given chance to take up all the subjects in their early age and continue with it for their post-graduation as per their interests. Furthermore, sports play key role in physical fitness and well-being of an individual. Another thing to add is that, participating in sports will also improve social skills and sense of team-work among students.
In conclusion, there is a noticeable trend of a greater number of boys involved in sports than girls. But girls should also be given equal opportunities for reasons mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...y this happens and should this continue in future, or the stigma should be broken. Firstl...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and number of teams available for them. While, girls only have handful of teams to jo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, another thing, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15325670498 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87149861974 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8520483743 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284503416778 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104218435452 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519351544702 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183342707088 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617883175098 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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