Today, advanced science and technology have made great changes to people's life, but artists are still valued high such as musicians, painters and writers. What can the arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?
It is technological revolution rather than arts. which are thought highly of for providing empirical data and practical solutions to problems, that brings out variations in our lifestyle and anything relevant. Still, various forms of arts offer a unique perspective on life that any technique cannot replicate.
The arts explore the emotional depth of human experiences in a way that science and technology cannot. Works of art such as literature, music, painting, dance, theater, and film can convey the range of human emotions with acute precision and sensitivity. A scientific or technological solution may solve a problem practically, but it cannot capture the complex emotional landscape of human experience.
Science and technology aim to solve problems, whereas art is often concerned with beauty and aesthetics. The beauty of art arises from its ability to inspire wonder or reflect the complexity of the world around us, offering insight into how we see and understand our environment. The ability to create beauty and craft objects that are aesthetically pleasing is both a human instinct and a reflection of cultural identity.
Art reflects and shapes culture, providing insight into cultural practices, beliefs, and values. Whether it be music, literature, or visual art, works of art serve as a record of human thought, feelings, and ideas over time. Art offers a window into human history, and by studying different cultures' artworks, we can gain insights into the values and norms by which they live.
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- Some people believe that in order to reduce crime criminals should be given longer prison sentences Others however think there are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- It s more important for school children to learn about their local history than world history To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people believe that if a police officer carries guns it can encourage a higher level of violence To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...hnological revolution rather than arts. which are thought highly of for providing emp...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...to create beauty and craft objects that are aesthetically pleasing is both a human instinct and a reflecti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35416666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88732563206 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2502027569 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.083333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192946171095 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751110708384 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566027433716 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112769680539 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363875630721 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...hnological revolution rather than arts. which are thought highly of for providing emp...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...to create beauty and craft objects that are aesthetically pleasing is both a human instinct and a reflecti...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35416666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88732563206 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2502027569 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.083333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192946171095 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751110708384 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566027433716 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112769680539 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363875630721 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.