Today family members do not eat meals together. Why? Is this a positive or a negative trend?
Children nowadays are subjected to a great deal of stress, and one element contributing to this stress is parents' excessive desire for their children to succeed in life. This attitude has arisen among parents for a variety of reasons, and if it continues, unpleasant consequences may occur.
The competitive mindset among parents is the primary cause of this phenomenon. Parents frequently force their children to participate in a variety of academic and non-academic activities because they feel that skill in numerous areas is necessary for a successful future prospect. Thus, children are put under a lot of stress in order to attain the intended results. Parents also experience a sense of satisfaction when their child achieves in numerous subjects, and they frequently associate it with their social position, which adds to the compulsion.
Overpressurization, in my opinion, is harmful to a child's mental health. When children are forced to participate in activities that are beyond their interests and capabilities, it may not provide a positive end since the children may experience a great deal of anxiety. When they try to deal with the strain of becoming successful, their mental health suffers, which can lead to depression and low self-esteem. It can even lead to scenarios where the youngster decides to run away from home due to his incapacity to cope with the demands in some cases.
To summarize, competitiveness among youngsters has risen dramatically in recent years, and parents are using compulsion to instill this mindset in their children. Although this may aid in the shaping of a child's future to some level, I feel it has a negative influence on a child's psychological health.
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- Some people believe women are better leaders than men To which extent do you agree or disagree 61
- some people think that regardless of age teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adults punishments 73
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- The crime rate will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes Do you agree or disagree 74
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, thus, i feel, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21454545455 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09576944066 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538181818182 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9983042301 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0533363115194 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022755164531 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253669955279 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0400211949426 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264153005125 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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