Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that advertising is popular to sell products by companies or brands. While I accept that advertising plays a role in sales, I believe many consumers buy products according to quality when their demands increase.
I am of the opinion that high sales of consumer goods have partly come from advertising. First of all, appearing of many brands is difficulty appeal customer that is reason need to invite celebrities collab with their company. Which makes fans of the celebrities buy products without taking charge of real needs. Beside that, almost all companies use strategies such as flash sale or discount. Which makes buyers interested in and buy goods without care about their demand as well as goods’s valuement.
However, I would believe that many people buy commodities based on real needs. The first point is that the living standards of everyone need more things and buy more, and also rely on their income as a substitute for advertisements in social media, television or news. Furthermore, people look for items within their budget range because if they do not it their life can fall hard. For instance, their savings just buy an apartment but they buy a house who will be face to face a big loan.
In conclusion, I agree advertising is needed to use in products marketing of companies; however, I am in favour of the opinion that more people make reasonable decisions in buying items.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... celebrities collab with their company. Which makes fans of the celebrities buy produ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94979079498 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66699562638 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619246861925 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4818474583 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5833333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165073485072 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634846583479 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348232870867 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979070995169 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327786722373 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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