Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Climate change has had obvious impacts on life on Earth, but many people said that why we do not accept and live with this rather than find ways to stop this . I totally disagree with this opinion, because I suppose that we still have time to tackle this issue and reduce the human impact on the Earth’s climate.
There are many ways that people could take to prevent, or at least mitigate, climate change. The development of technology helps people who can create highly applicable products against the ever-growing change of climate. For example, AI is a significant invention because it is used for smart homes which aim to limit wasteful use of resources. Moreover, the governments could impose fine-levels on industrial factories, production activities release more carbon dioxide into the air or other polluters, and they could invest in funds that work for the environment. This issue is not an only individual concern but also everyone’s responsibility.
Besides that, we need to be aware human activity can be directly attributed to the cause of climate change. Forest clearance for farming as the burning forest that leads to rising emissions pollution. Farmers should change agriculture methods to adapt to climate change. Additionally, greenhouse gas emissions have come from human activities as using gasoline for driving a car or coal for heating a building. As individuals, we should also try to limit our contribution to climate change, by becoming more energy efficient, and by using bicycles and public transport. Small changes form new habits that could create big positive changes for the Earth.
In conclusion, it appears to me that we need to address as far as possible, and I disagree with people who argue that we can find ways to leave with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, still, at least, for example, i suppose, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09556313993 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76200738726 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9065234297 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249253493914 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825813992601 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894069246208 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169317729097 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814553561304 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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