Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that today consumers may find themselves bombarded with a barrage of advertisements from businesses trying to promote their products to the general public. Although this advertising to some extent has an impact on sales, I believe that we also do need most of the items that we buy.
Admittedly, the allure of vivid graphics and imageries often found in adverts may sway customers to purchase the products being promoted, even when they have no real need for them. This is reinforced by celebrity endorsements, which have a dramatic influence on people wanting to imitate their idols. For example, the adverts of mobile phones which feature prominent pop stars can be found everywhere on social media feeds or on many websites in Vietnam. People who have excessive exposure to commercials may trigger impulse buying. As a result, they cannot resist the urge to replace their phone with the latest models and waste money on a product that would be of little value to them.
However, I believed that most people do not buy products because of advertising alone. There are other good reasons why they make these choices and there must be some kinds of need before a person makes a purchase. With respect to the former, the new versions of products almost always have improved features that meet the requirements of customers. To illustrate, a new car may be more economical to run, pollute less, or have upgraded safety features. In addition, advertising just acts as a tool to keep informed consumers about newly- launched products and various items when they need to buy some kind of goods, which helps people have more choices about their beloved products.
In conclusion, even though advertisements may influence consumer buying behavior, people would not make decisions that go against their real needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...trying to promote their products to the general public. Although this advertising to some exte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, it is true, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03311258278 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63319786129 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9074155175 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154383334986 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539203609742 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396984611186 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100903223033 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290355981554 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.