Today many countries import food from different parts of the world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
In recent time, trade is flourishing and many consumer goods are being traded around the world. It has been noticed that even food is being imported from or exported to different countries. In my view, although the advantages of this outweighs its disadvantages, the downsides of this development should not be overcome.
To begin with, some fruits and vegetables can only be grown in particular place. By importing them, people living in other parts of the world can enjoy them. For instance, kiwi cannot be grown in India, but all Indians can still enjoy this, thanks to imports. Moreover, this gives an opportunity to the unaffluent and developing countries boost their economic climate by selling their rare goods to world.
On the flip side, the drawbacks of importing of foods should be considered. It is undeniable fact that, imported and exported foods is not always healthy. As those food materials have to be transported long distances and they are inevitably preserved using chemical preservatives to extend their expiration date. These preservatives can cause dreadful diseases such as cancer. Furthermore, the importing of food can weaken the economy of poor countries.
In conclusion, although the import and export of food products is an opportunity for both sellers and buyers to earn money and enjoy exotic foods, their harmful impact on dwellers health should be considered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dwellers'' or 'dweller's'?
Suggestion: dwellers'; dweller's
...y exotic foods, their harmful impact on dwellers health should be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29910714286 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80668332753 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633928571429 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6551378879 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3076923077 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233511835208 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830067270969 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553846293454 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133487317774 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612857231329 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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