Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
It is widely argued that what should people do when they have leisure time. According to the social speed, numerous answers are that they choose to travel due to countless benefits.
For a long period before, people used to prejudice to travel somewhere because of ancient thinking. They thought that the cost of traveling was pretty high, even they might be hazardous. Nevertheless, nowadays, travelling is the best choice in order that people could be relieved and find something news based on numerous reasons. One reason is that they have many interesting experience. As far as I know, each of places associated with historical significance that could extend human knowledge. Hence, people often tend to go sightseeing various locations and find well-being things. For instance, when I was a child, I always dreamed about travelling to China through China historical films. And when I grew up, I came to China and I learned a lot of intelligence about impressive structures. Another reason is that every trip would build relationship due to connection with other people. They have an opportunity to practice soft skills helping people in their life. Nowadays, parents often let children participate in summer camp organized in somewhere in order to train teamwork skills. After summer camp, children would become independently, even they could do difficult things without helping. In particular, a variety of people choose to travel since this is a chance of generating money. Recently, it is widely promoted that travelling blogger brings not only wonderful empirical but also high salary. They have merely review about wonderful locations and introduce reader about this. According to the job statistics, the rate of travelling blogger is highly recommended due to flexible time, with 72% above all. In contract, working in official has 10%
In conclusion, depending on numerous aspects, I strongly believe that people should travel more and more because of its benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 360, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much interesting experience', 'a good deal of interesting experience'.
Suggestion: much interesting experience; a good deal of interesting experience
...s reasons. One reason is that they have many interesting experience. As far as I know, each of places assoc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29841269841 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78688574835 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0546217697 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8421052632 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268619795583 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794485104113 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767432330725 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190532282479 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393484357121 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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